句子统一性和连惯性

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1、句子的统一性和连惯性句子的统一性和连贯性是相辅相成的，最简单的解释是：意思完整、主次分明、前后连贯。从语义上看，句子各部分应该是精密联系在一起，表达一个完整的意思；从语法角度来看，正确的句子应该是结构严谨、关系一致、语序正确；从修辞角度来看，好的句子应该是中心突出，逻辑性强，准确简练。如果一个句子表达的意思不完整，主次关系不明确，逻辑关系混乱，那么这个句子的统一性和连贯性就遭到破坏，句子就有语病，读者也就无法了解作者的本意。如下列句子在统一性和逻辑性方面就存在问题：1.Myuncleisaheavys

2、mokerandheownsalargecompanyinNanjing.2.Weateourbreakfastandwewenttotheclassroom.3.Weworkveryhardbecausewearestudents.4.TherainstoppedwhenJanedied.5.ThecarslowlyrumbledtoahaltasIrealizedwehadrunoutofgas.6.Threehoursweretoolongforafilm.7.Wehavebeenlivingi

3、nBeijingfor20yearsbeforewemovedtoNanjing.8.Ourschoolteamplayedveryhardandtherivalteamwasbeatenbyus.9.Ifoneworkshard,theywillnotfail.10.Wewenttothelibraryandtheseatswerealreadytaken.11.Comeinandtakealookandyoumustfindsomethingtoyourneed.12.Beingverypoora

4、ndnotwanttotroubleanyoneelse,Marygoestoclasswithoutbreakfast.13.Mywifeisthirty,verykind,verybeautifulandaverygoodmother.14.Sheisnotonlyatriple-Astudent,butalsorespectsherteachers.15.Weshouldallbeconsciousandsensitivetoourenvironmentaldeterioration.二、好句子

5、的标准1、完整完整是好句子的第一要点。1.LiBaiwasoneofthegreatestpoets.2.Accordingtotherequirement,writingacomposition.2、连惯连惯是指句子各部分之间清楚而合理的联系。不连贯的句子通常有以下几种毛病：平行结构有缺点、代词指代不清楚、逻辑主语和句子主语不一致、以及人称、数、语态、时态或语气上有混乱之处。1.Amanisjudgednotonlybywhathesaysbutalsobyhisdeeds.2.Hefelldown

6、stairs,butitwasnotserious.3.Inordertogivehiswifeapleasantsurprise,abouquetofredroseswasready.4.Comeearlyandyou’llseehim.5.ThosewhowishtotakeCET-6testsareexpectedtosignhisnameonthissheetofpaper.1.Studentsshouldlearntoanalyzeandsolveproblemsindependently.

7、Don’trelyonyourteacher’shelp.2.Wereviewedthelessontaughtlastweekandalltheexercisesassignedbytheteacherweredone.1、简洁1.Inmyopinion,Ithinktheplanisfeasible.2.Mymotherisakindandprettywomen.3.Girlsusuallylikeallkindsoftheatricalmakeupsorcosmeticsthatareprodu

8、cedinFrance.4.LiMing,whowasmonitorofourclass,wouldgotothelibraryeverydayintheevening.Hewouldborrowanovelfromthelibrarian.Inthelibrary,hewouldfindaseatinthecornerandreadit.三、句式的多样性1、名词：1.Time,placeandactivityshouldbearrangedfirstw