第一单元作文错误

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1、Print1、However,IwillliveinnearmyparentsandmycousinandIcanseethemeveryday.点评：语法错误，建议将everyday改为everyday。错误类型：形容词错误Whatwillmylifebelikein20years［首师大附属云岗中学］2、Plantshelpusbreatheincarbondioxideandexhaleoxygen,maketheairaroundusisbecomingmorepureandfresh.点评：more..p

2、ure疑似形容词比较级误用。错误类型：形容词错误Whatmylifewillbelikein20years［清华附中丰台学校］3、Letusworktogethertostrengthenenvironmentalprotectionconsciousness,makeenvironmentclean,theairmorepureandfreshandsweet,morelushtrees,theriverismoreclear.点评：more..pure疑似形容词比较级误用。错误类型：形容词错误Whatmylif

3、ewillbelikein20years［清华附中丰台学校］4、IwanttogotoShanghaiforvacation,andI'llprobablytoSingaporeforholiday.点评：请检查forholiday中名词的单复数。错误类型：名词错误WhatWillMyLifeBelikein20Years［丰台七中］5、Iwillbuythehouseineverycounties.点评：请检查everycounties，注意名词数的一致性。错误类型：名词错误MyLifein20years［十八

4、中左安门分校］6、Inmysparetime,Iwillreadbooksandtravelaroundtovisitthefamousbuilding,IcanseeGoodsceneryandeatlocalfood.点评：请检查Good，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误MyLifein20years［十八中左安门分校］7、And,alsolaunchedasupernewcarofenvironmentalprotection,nameissolarcar.点评：car疑似冠词缺失或可数名词单用。错误类型：

5、名词错误Whatmylifewillbelikein20years［清华附中丰台学校］8、IwillliveinmycountryCHINA.点评：请检查CHINA，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误WhatMyLifeWillBeLikeIn20Years［东铁营二中］9、I'llliveinbeijing.点评：请检查beijing，确认大小写正确。错误类型：名词错误Myfuturelife［十八中西马校区］10、WhenIgetangry,Itcanalsomakemehappy.点评：请检查It，确认大小

6、写正确。错误类型：名词错误Myfuturelife［十八中西马校区］11、IlovechildrensoIthinkIwillbeanartteacherandIwillteachmystudentshowtopaintbothbyhandsandbycomputer.点评：建议将byhands改为byhand。错误类型：名词错误WhatWillMyLifeBeLikeinTwentyYears［长辛店学校］12、Iplantodesignsomesupersoftwaresthatcanhelppeopledra

7、wbeautifulpicturesjustastheycanimagine.点评：softwares一般不用复数形式错误类型：名词错误WhatWillMyLifeBeLikeinTwentyYears［长辛店学校］13、BecauseIcanseedifferentview.点评：view疑似冠词缺失或可数名词单用。错误类型：名词错误Inmyfuturelife［中国教科院丰台实验学校］14、Inthefuture,IwillbeabusinessmanandIwillbeamediacompany'spres

8、ident.点评：单复数错误，建议将amedia改为amedium。错误类型：名词错误Mylifein20years［黄土岗中学］15、Iwanttobetheteacherthatarefriendswithstudents,soIwillstilltalktostudentsfacetofaceratherthanusingsocialmedia.点评：