ESL英语作为第二语言写作范文Model Answers.ppt

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1、ESLWritingModelAnswerAnalysisWeek9Exercise6Recentlyyouwereinvitedtoanimportantfamilycelebrationheldinanothertown.Unfortunatelyyouweredelayedonthejourneyandarrivedlate.Writealettertoafriendexplainingwhathappened.Yourlettershouldbeabout150-200wordslong.Don’tforgettoinclude:w

2、hythecelebrationwasbeingheldwhatkindofproblemyouhadonthejourneywhathappenedintheend.Youwillreceiveupto9marksforthecontentofyourletter,andupto9marksforthestyleandaccuracyofyourlanguage.ModelanswerJustaquicklinetotellyouwhathasbeenhappeninghere.Myunclehasbeenmanagerofatoyfac

3、toryfortwentyyearsandheretiredlastweek.Hiscompanygaveabigpartyforhim,tothankhimandcelebratedhisretirement.Familymemberswereinvitedtoo.Unfortunately,onthewaytothepartyanothercarcrashedintous!Wehadstoppedtoletawomanwithapushchaircrosstheroad,anothercarcameroundthecornertoofa

4、standthedrivercouldn’tstopintime.Luckily,noonewashurt---justabitshaken.I’mgladIwaswearingmyseatbelt,Icantellyou!However,thebackofDad’scarwasreallysmashedup.Thedriverreluctantlyagreedtopayforthedamageandwecontinuedourjourneybytaxi.ModelanswerWearrivedatthepartytothesoundofc

5、heeringasmyunclewentontotheplatformtomakehisretirementspeech.Weweresogladwemadeitintime.Writetomesoonandletmeknowallyournews.Exercise7Yourlocalnewspaperisleadingacampaigntoopenapostofficeinyourvillage,whichwillalsoprovideinternetandinternationaltelephonefacilitiesforthecom

6、munity.Theeditorhasaskedpeopletowritetothenewspapersayingwhethertheysupportthisidea.Herearesomeofthecommentsreceived:Exercise7‘It’salongwalktothenearestpostofficeatpresent.’‘We’relookingforwardtobeingabletobuystampsandsendparcelsfromourownvillage.’‘Ihaven’tgotacomputeratho

7、meandI’dliketobeabletousetheinternetforinformationandcommunication.’‘Itwillcauseallsortsofproblems---peoplewillcrowdintouseitanddroprubbisheverywhere.’‘Itwillcreateseveralnewjobsinthevillage,whichwereallyneed.’Exercise7Writealettertothenewspapergivingyourviewsabouttheidea.

8、Yourlettershouldbeabout150-200wordslong.Beginyourletter‘DearEditor’.Donotwriteanaddress.T