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1、昆明新东方学校CrackCET-4Writing lecture-4Bob文章的构思作文实战不同文体写作翻译实践√预 测√√表达不是问题，问题在于错误太多，而麻烦则是：不知道自己的表达有误！Tasks句子的润色：词汇选择翻译实践句子润色篇准确选词在一些国家里妇女没有得到平等的权利。Womenarenotabletogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.Womencannotgettheequalrightsinsomecountries.Womenfailtogettheequalrightsinsomecountries.这不是解决能源危机的最好的
2、办法。Thisisnotthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.Thisisbynomeansthebestwaytosolvetheproblemofenergycrisis.决不我们应保护树木，不让它们受破坏。Weshouldprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.Weoughttoprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.Wemustprotecttreesfrombeingdestroyed.在旧中国，我们连一个钉子都造不了，更不用说制造机器了。InoldChinawecouldnot
3、makeanail,nottomention(making)machines.InoldChinawecouldnotmakeanail,letalone(make)machines.含有半否定意义的词语barely,hardly,few,little,rarely,scarcely,seldom,notall,noteveryone,noteverything几年前在冬天市场上很难见到新鲜蔬菜。Wecouldhardlyseeanyfreshvegetablesinwinteronmarketseveralyearsago.这些年轻人几乎不知道如何挑选优秀的书籍来读。Thes
4、eyoungpeopleknowlittleabouthowtochoosegoodbookstoread.不含否定意义的否定结构cannotbut,can'thelp,nosooner...than,not...until,innotime,noneotherthan,nothingbut我们只有面对现实。Wecan'tbutfacethereality.这些旧建筑将很快为现代化的公寓所代替。Theseoldbuildingswillbereplacedbymodernapartmentbuildingsinnotime.否定结构的倒装语序我们决不应当盲从。Onnoaccou
5、ntshouldwefollowblindly.没有任何其他地方有我国这样高的学习热情。Nowherehastheworldeverseensuchgreatenthusiasmforlearningasinourcountry.＂Therebe＂结构错误： Therearemanypeopleliketogotothemovies.正确： Therearemanypeoplewholiketogotothemovies.错误： Therearedifferentkindsofvegetablescanbeboughtonthemarketbypeople.正确： Therea
6、redifferentkindsofvegetablesthatpeoplecanbuyonthemarket.比较结构错误： Comparingwiththebike,thecarrunsmuchfaster.正确： Comparedwiththebike,thecarrunsmuchfaster.错误： TheclimateinWaltoniscolderthanothercities.正确： TheclimateinWaltoniscolderthanthatofothercities.同级比较In1998weproducedasmanycarsaswedidinthep
7、reviousfiveyears.Wehaveaccomplishedasmuchinthepastthreeyearsaswouldhavetakentenyearsinthepast.比较级Childrennowenjoybettermedicaltreatmentthanbefore.Wecanlivelongerwithoutfoodthanwecan(live)withoutwater.表达原因的结构错误： Therealreasontoourfailureisnotfartose
