GRE评改文章及写作策略

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1、包凡一GRE写作讲义GRE评改文章及写作策略CurrentProblemsLnoexamplesorevidencetosupportstatements2.failuretodemonstratetheunderstandingofthecomplexitya.implicationsofastatement(legallybansmoking),b・qualificationofastatement(narrowdownageneralandvaguestatement),c.andacknowledgethemeritsinanopposingview

2、3・threebodyparagraphsinsteadoftwo(prepareexamplesinadvance)4.toapplytheTOEFLtacticstoGRE5.simplerepitioninthefinalparagraph6.poorworkingvocabularySolutionswriteexampleswritebeginningparagraphsandandanoutlineforthebodypartsendittomeatmyemailaddressincreaseworkingvocabularyReserchPap

3、erasanexampleFirstChapter1.hypothesisandnull-hypothesis2.literaturereview3・methodologydiscussion4.conclusionSecondChapterThecontentofthesurveyTheoperationorthecalculationConcludingChapterFirstparagraphstateswhatthischapterisabout.Thelastparagraphstateswhathasbeentalkedabout.PSasexa

4、mplesBand4and6asexamples缺乏例证NonmainstreamareasandHumanNeedsRules:Presentyourperspectiveontheissuebelow,usingrelevantreasonsand/orexamplestosupportyourviews.Topic:"Suchnonmainstreamareasofinquiryasastrology,fortune-telling,andpsychicandparanormalpursuitsplayavitalroleinsocietybysati

5、sfyinghumanneedsthatarcnotaddressedbymainstreamscience/1原稿：1(istruethatincontemporarysocietythenonmainstreamareasofinquiry,suchasastrology,fortune-tellingandthelike,satisfyhumanneedsmorethanthemainstreamscience・Buiwhatweshouldbearinmindisthat,alwaysitisthemainstreamsciencethatpoint

6、outthewaytoovercomevariousobstacles,andlightuppeople'shopeintruemeaning・语言错误：1・“ltistrue”是多余的。第一句话中的”more”出了很大的问题，曲解了原意,把nonmainstream的作用说的比mainstreamenquiry还要重要。原來说的是“playavitalrole”，并不是“pivotal”role.书而英语中应避免使用“Andthelike”。"燃起希望”:sparkhope,kindlehope“lightup”的意思是给人带來兴奋和快乐，如：Theshi

7、ningreportcardslitFather'sfaceup./Thefunnycaroonpicturelitupthechildren'seyes.改后稿：Incontemporarysocietynonmainstreamareasofinquirysuchasastrologyandfortune-tellingsatisfyhumanneedsmorethanmainstreamscience.Butweshouldbearinmindthatmainstreamsciencealwayspointsthewaytoovercomeobstac

8、lesandsparkspeopledhopeinf