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1、高考作文训练:看图作文写作技巧写作步骤:1.审题:图片描述----体裁、人称、时态、中心2.列提纲:主要内容3.用英语组织篇章----合适的连接词作文中常用的语法结构：从句类：定语从句;状语从句;名词性从句非谓语：不定式、分词做后置定语、状语；动名词相关句型强调倒装：否定副词置于句首；Only+状语置于句首；频率副词置于句首；让步状语置于句首；各种强调倒装句型形容词副词：themore…themore句型;noadj.than;more…than…;各种词组虚拟语气：Iwish…;Iwouldrather…;It’stime…;It’snecessary(importa
2、nt…)that…should…作文修改范例详解假设下面六幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲身经历。请你根据画面所示内容，用英语写一篇120字左右的日记。今天下午我去看电影.Iwenttothecinemathisafternoon.Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.在路上,我看到一个手提箱从一辆自行车上掉了下来.Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offaman’sbike.我捡起箱子,并想骑车人大声喊叫,但他却已经骑远了.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedattheman,bu
3、thehadalreadyrodeaway.于是,我拦了一辆出租车去追赶失主.Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman.我终于追上了失主,并把箱子还给他.Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.失主非常的感动,他拿出一些钱来感谢我,但被我拒绝了.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.我又乘车返回了电影院,司机被我的行动所感动,不收我的车费.Iwentbacktothecinemabytaxi.Thedriverwasverymovedanddid
4、n’tacceptmymoney.Sample:May3rd,FridayFineThisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman'sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedatthemantostop.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.WhatshouldIdo?ThenIhadanidea.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim
5、.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.Thenthedrivertookmetothecinema.WhenIpaidhim,thedriverwouldn’tacceptthemoney.HesaidhewasverymovedatwhatIdid.Howtoreviseit?Originalversion:Iwenttoseeafilmthisafternoon.Onthewaytothecinema,Isawacasefalloffaman’sbike.Revisedversi
6、on:IwasonmywaytothecinemathisafternoonwhenIhappenedtoseeacasefalloffaman’sbike.Originalversion:Ipickedupthecase.Ishoutedatthemanloudly.Buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.Revisedversion:①Afterpickingupthecase,Ishoutedatthemanloudly,butherodetoofasttohearme.②LoudlyasIshoutedathimafterpickingitup
7、,themanwasridingsofarawaythathecouldn’thearme.③IshoutedatthemanthemomentIpickeditup,however,hewasridingtoofasttohearme.Originalversion:Suddenly,Ihadanidea.//Istoppedataxitocatchupwiththeman.//Icaughtupwithhimatlast.Revisedversion:①Suddenly,anideaflashedintomymind.Iheldout
