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1、MakeYourCompositionsMoreBeautifulMakeYourCompositionsMoreBeautiful1.words2.usefulexpressions3.linkingwords4.sentencestructures5.passageorganization一.运用高级词汇1.这件事情挺难的。2.我们就会了解父母的辛苦工作。We’llthenknowaboutparents’hardship.3.这有助于我们学会节俭。Thishelpsuslearntobethrifty.
2、Thisisachallengingjob.高级词汇举例:significanthardshipavailablecontactdemandingrelativelywastefulfrequent二.增加形容词或副词1.在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。2.如果父母的收入较好,…Thereliesalovelypondinourbeautifulcampus.Iftheirparentshavearelativelyhighincome,...表示程度的副词举例hardlyseldomrarelymerelyre
3、lativelyslightlyabitpartlycompletely三.置于句首的副词1.这极有可能使孩子养成依赖父母的习惯。2.尤其当父母有足够的钱养家时，…。Probablythiswillmakethechildrendevelopthehabitoflivingonparents.Especiallywhentheirparentshaveenoughmoneytosupportthefamily,….句首副词举例strangelyfrequentlyespeciallyunbelievablyu
4、nexpectedlysurprisinglybesides四.各类句型1.插入语然而,其他同学持有不同意见。Theotherstudents,however,holdthedifferentviews.另外，他们会以为将来可以依赖父母。Besides,they’llthinktheycanrelyontheirparentsinthefuture.2.It句型我们期望今年有个好收成。Itisexpectedthattherewillbeagoodharvest.30%学生认为无必要让孩子知道父母的收入。30
5、%ofthestudentsthinkitunnecessarytoletchildrenknowhowmuchtheirparentsearn.3.with结构作业做完了，那个男孩出去玩了。Withthehomeworkfinished,theboywentouttoplay.有了父母可依赖，他们就不再努力学习了。They’llnotstudyhardanymore,withparentstodependon.4.分词短语30%同学不赞同这一看法，认为孩子不应当…。30%ofmyclassmatesdisa
6、greetoit,sayingchildrenshouldn’t….知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。Knowingthis,they’llstudyharderandharder.5.从句他所做的一切使我们很失望。（主语从句）Whathediddisappointedusall.我们应当知道父母的收入，因为这有助于我们理解他们的艰辛。（状语从句）Weshouldknowparents’income,becauseit’llhelpusunderstandhowhardtheyhavetowork.五.连接成
7、分表示时间:firstofall;tobeginwith;andthen;finally;eventually---表示递进:what’smore;moreover;furthermore;inaddition;tomakethingsworse;themostimportantofall;表示并列:and;but;or;so…表示转折:however;onthecontrary;nevertheless;anyway;anyhow;inspiteof;despite表示因果:asaresult;result
8、in;thus;owingto;dueto;asaconsequence;therefore表示结论:inshort;inbrief;inaword;aboveall;onthewholeJoe,whoisalawyerintown,persuadedthemtosettletheproblem.Joe,alawyerintown,persuadedthemtosettletheproblem.Jo
