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仔细阅读说明该笔记请结合视频观看，笔记已经标出哪些内容适合英语1或者英语2适用。视频讲解是先从大作文第二段开始讲解，然后第一段讲解，接着第三段，最后第四段。笔记难免有未到位之处还请以视频为主。该笔记第二段和第三段、第四段的内容讲解适合英语2的同学，英语1整个笔记都适用。英语2的同学第一段请看补充的视频，时间仅37分钟。A、第二段：英语一和英语二均适用S1、原因段——共5句1、数据写法：inaccordancewiththemostupdatedstatisticsconductedbyNewsweek,afamousnewspaperconcernedwithpublichealthinamerica,smokingisthebiggestkillertodayforus,causingover3millionlivesayear.2、理论写法：basedonthemostwidelyacceptedtheoryconcerningpublichealthandsmokingbyprofessorAlexsandraCoffman,aleadingexpertintheresearchofhealth,smokingiscausinghugedisaterforhumanbeingstoday.3、伦理写法：①respectingtheoldwas,isandwillbeacherishedvalueforeverychinese②respectingtheoldwas,isandwillbeacherishedvalueforeverychinese,oldoryoung,richorpoor,sonordaughter.③MissGao句型n,n+从1，n2+从2，n3+从3，+原句MissGao,ateacherwhotaughtmeenglishwheniwasinschool;afriendwhohelpedmealotwheniwasintrouble;aladywhoisalwaysnicetoherstudents,diednow.S2、实践中的好处和坏处①smokingislikeopenningapandorabox,causingtremendousharmforeveryone,oldoryoung,richorpoor,menorwoman.潘多拉②itwillhurtnotonlyyourhealthbuttheenvironmentaswell.③smokingwillbringsomanyharms,inwhichhurtingyourhealthisonlyatipofaniceberg.冰山一角④playingcardsmayseemfunny,yetitisnothingbutablessingindisguise斗地主5 smokingisthelastthingayoungpersonshouddo.⑤thenegativeeffectthatsmokingmaybringisneveraflashinpan,butlong-lastingandfar-reaching.昙花一现⑥ifayoungpersongetaddictedtosmoking,hewillbetrappedintheshellofhisownmaking.作茧自缚⑦ifayoungpersonfallsintosmoking,itwillbecomethewaterlooofhislife.滑铁卢（象征失败）省略句用于具体化，一定用被动写⑧smokingwillbringsomanyharms,inwhichhurtingyourhealthisonlyatipofaniceberg.Withyearsofsmoking,yourphysicalhealthwillbedamaged,andwithityourabilitytofocusinstudy.⑨Ifsomkingcannotbecontrolled,abettertomorrowwillbenothingbutUtopia.一个美好的明天将是一个幻象。（乌托邦）⑩atempestinteacup小题大做⑪smokingislikediggingyourowngrave.自掘坟墓⑫比喻写法1、否定not...anymorethan①acollectionoffactscannotbecalledscience,anymorethanapileofbrickscanbecalledahouse.②moneyisnotimportanttotheyoung,anymorethancombisimportanttothemonk③Icannotunderstandyouanymorethanthedaycanunderstandthenight2肯定nolessthan①timeisimportanttotheyoung,nolessthansunshineisimportanttoplants②teamworkingisnecessarytosuccessnolessthanpetrolisnecessarytoacar.S3、举例子（用简单句）具体看视频S4、例子虚拟反述5 iftheyhadn'tsmokedthatmuch,theywouldn'thavegonetosuchanearlytomb.S5、启下①somethingneedtobedone,anditisnowornever②facingthe challengeof (主题词）itisnotthetimetoaskwhatcanbedoneforyou，butwhatcanbedonebyyou③abettertomorrowissharedbyall,yetmadebyeach,anditistimetodosomethingnow.人人为我，我为人人B描述段（首段）英语一的同学参看S1、引出：1、奥巴马版1ifthereisanyonewhostilldoubtsthevalue(harm)of();whostillwonderswhattodo;whostillquestionsthepowerof(),thepictureaboveisyouranswer!2、莎士比亚版①tosmoke,ornotto,thatisaquestion②tosmoke,ornotto,thatisaquestion,aquestionraisedinthepicture,andaquestiontobeansweredbyallofus,oldoryoung,richorpoor.(加入描述细节）myanswertothatissimpleanddefinite:加观点句3、专业版basedonthetheoryofbutterflyeffect,atinydefecttodaymayendupwithhugedisasterinfuture,andthisisexactlywhatthepictureisshowingus:4、网络版thebiggestdistanceintheworldisnotbetweentruthandfalse,butwhentruthisbeforeyou,likewecanseeinthepicture,yetyoufailtounderstand.5 5、顾城诗歌版adarknightgivesusdarkeyes,yetweusethemtosearchforlight;asimplepictureshowsasimplestory,yetweuseittosearchfortruth.S2、描述（简单句，3句以内，用现在时态）观点句可以使用的简单句：suchastory/pictureistellingusthatibelievethat第三段（方法和建议）英语一和英语二的均适用C方法/建议段1、态度①althoughthewaytobansmokingisfilledwithupsanddowns,thetideisunabletoreturn.②althoughthewaytobansmokingisfilledwithupsanddowns,thedominoesarestartingtofall.③theonlythingforthetriumphofmisleadcauseisgoodpeopledonothing.④sometimesinlifewearecalledtodogreatthings,buteverydaywearecalledtodosamllthings,withgreatlove.⑤itistimetoputthoughtsintowords,andwordsintoaction.2、具体方法①thegovernmentisduetopalyapositiveroleto②functionallawsandregulationsmustbesetuptoregulate③forthesustainabilityofaprogramagainstsmoking,sufficientfundissoimportantandinevitable.参考：5 Scientistsmustcommunicatetheirmessagetothepublicinacompassionate,understandableway-inhumanterms,notinthelanguageofmolecularbiology.Weneedtomakecleartheconnectionbetweenanimalresearchandagrandmother'shipreplacement,afather'sbypassoperationababy'svaccinations,andevenapet'sshots.Tothosewhoareunawarethatanimalresearchwasneededtoproducethesetreatments,aswellasnewtreatmentsandvaccines,animalresearchseemswastefulatbestandcrue内：个人（我为人人，人人为我）外：政府教育钱法律专家教育公众S4、四段——观点的重播（一句话）ifsmokingiswellcontrolled,abettertomorrowisnotaquestionof‘ifbutwhen'.5
