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5、hlesssignificantlytojustbelow50grams,soalthoughitremainedtheleastpopularfood,consumptionlevelswerethemoststable.4.Theconsumptionofchicken,ontheotherhand,showedanupwardtrend,overtakingthatoflambin1980andthatofbeefin1989.By2004ithadsoaredtoalmost250gramsperpersonperweek.5

6、.Overall,thegraphshowshowtheconsumptionofchickenincreaseddramaticallywhilethepopularityoftheseotherfoodsdecreasedovertheperiod.第一段：1Thegraphillustrateschangesintheamountsofbeef,lamb,chickenandfishconsumedinaparticularEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.Thegraphillustrates

7、changes描述变化的常用句式。intheamountsof在…数量上。Consumed是过去分词作后置定语，表示“被消费”。相当于whichwereconsumed的定语从句。第二段：1In1979beefwasbyfarthemostpopularofthesefoods,withabout225gramsconsumedperpersonperweek.Byfar是在那吋，是常用的吋I'可状语；themostpopular最高级，of后面加“总体”，最高级的整体。With后面加数字；consumed是过去分词做后置定语，相当于

8、whichwereconsumedo2Lambandchickenwereeateninsimilarquantities(around150grams),whilemuchlessfishwasconsumed(justover50grams).Insimilarquantities是“相似的数量”的意思，括弧里面加入具体的数字，是常用的数据引出方式。Muchless是“更少”，much修饰比较级less；(justover50grams)同样也是用括号引出数据。第三段:1However,duringthis25-yearperio

9、dtheconsumptionofbeefandlambfelldramaticallytoapproximately100gramsand55gramsrespective!y.However连接前后两个段落，两个数据